Monday, June 26, 2017

The Pure Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Walking down the sidewalk by the river,
Looking at the falls crashing down with force,
The city lights were playing with their reflection,
And the lovers kissed.
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Asavri Dhillon
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Jazib Kamalvi 14 January 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Asavri D. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Asavri Dhillon 30 January 2018

Thank You.. :) I just read your poem and left a comment too. it's beautiful :)

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Lamar Cole 26 June 2017

Very good love write.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 26 June 2017

Such a poetic words of wisdom written here... Rated 10++++++ You may visit my HEARTACHES WILL NEVER LAST, BATHE YOUR HEART, BECAUSE I LOVE HER and TAKE TIME TO THINK. Thanks, Asavri👍

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Asavri Dhillon

Asavri Dhillon

Chandigarh, India
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