The Punk, The Monk, And The World Comments

5 votes before mine gave you a 10, I'd say well deserved dude

Brilliant write Ray, this is the first poem I've read from you, grat poetry.

Nothing much left for me to say, other than for your first draft, it came out perfect, i wouldn't change anything about it. Everything comes together perfectly.10+ great work.

YOUR POEMS SO TOUCH ME, RAY. EVERYONE SAYS SO MUCH, SO MANY FEELINGS, SO MANY THINGS TO THINK ABOUT. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!

A powerful portrayal of this world and it's troubles in 25 minutes -wow! . Guess I am a member of the beat generation-I have been coming back to a world where everything was different, yet exactly the same- a good and telling line

first draft is always best right on! most poetry shared on this site lacks the spirit you throw out into this, lacks the consciousness. its clear in subjective, nothing that meditation couldnt cure. bravo