The Pumping, Oozing Heart Comments

A great poem, it flows well easy to read with slightly dark undertones. Well done

Its a great poem with so much creativity, much imaginery power and good choice of words

You, like all poets, have your own unique way of writing poems. Your way is something that interests me quite a bit, this poem whch is of brillance, shows that you have quie a skill in creative writing. This is my favorite of yours.