Sunday, November 13, 2005
The Pumping Jungle Through Which The Red Hearts Love Comments
Rating: ★5.0
The fidelity of the day
Runs along the chrome gills
Of her highway,
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
13 November 2005
I liked the way you say...'I got lucky! ' The poem is very descriptive. Oh, there is one point I'd like to make: 3rd line in 2nd stanza...'When she 'tell' you' or 'When she tells you...' Maybe? Or 'When she's telling you...you do not know her! ' Nonetheless, Robert...nice work.
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8/2/2025 1:20:33 PM # 1.0.0
Hi Rob A treat to see you back posting again. Excellent imagery, very evocative and captivating. I see your lay-off hasn't hurt your work any.