Sunday, December 10, 2017

The Pubescents Comments

Rating: 5.0

When you ask them,
"What are you doing"?
They say,
"Nothing".
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Rebecca Navarre 18 April 2025

Ever so heart touching! .. An amazing write! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 18 April 2025

Magnificently expressed! .. As such an age is heartwarming, defiant, confusing, and yet filled with wonder! ..

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Nabakishore Dash 06 April 2023

Nice experiences written beautifully.

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Nabakishore Dash 31 May 2022

I liked the truth of your last stanza.revered madam.

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Kesav Easwaran 07 February 2020

Well written piece. You gals know better. A new life, new revelation I suppose. Nice one on female life 10+

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Anjandev Roy 20 December 2019

Fantastic write. Thank u, dear poetess. anjandev Roy.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 October 2019

Oh, the Pubescents/Their lives/Are full of wonders....wonderful ending! My pleasure reading this excellent piece again and again!

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Dr Antony Theodore 31 March 2019

I was once A pubescent And my favorite line was " What else can I do " ? a very fine poem.. wonderful psychological observation. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Aniruddha Pathak 03 January 2019

Like buds about to blossom, they fill the life with fresh colours and there is not a dull moment. A lovely poem

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 November 2018

Pubescence has vital influence on body and mind. In this stage what a person dreams is astutely inscribed in this poem which is much interesting. The last stanza is much impressive in this concern.

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Akhtar Jawad 30 November 2018

Read this poem again. I think Pubes-cents are better than those who claim they know everything and they can do anything.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 August 2018

An incisive and impressive inscription has been made on the Pubescent that attracts the reader for which I have reviewed for second time. The lines those touch me much are.....When you tell them This is what you gonna do. They quickly say, We absolutely know.

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Khairul Ahsan 13 May 2018

We absolutely know. - In my pubescent, I do not recall ever having thought so. But today's pubescent indeed think so. A nice poem, with well articulated thoughts on a contemporary topic.

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Robert Murray Smith 02 May 2018

As we grow our mind follows slowly at first then in leaps and bounds. Sorry, for my cliched response but this is what came out of my mind.+++10

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Mr. Mister 07 April 2018

Very true. A keen observation on Pubescents. Enjoyed reading it.

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Akhtar Jawad 16 March 2018

A pubescent is one who is about to open his eyes as an. His wonders should be ignored until he/she becomes a matured. A nice psychological observation of a pubescent.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 February 2018

Full of wonders! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 February 2018

A wonderful poem Rose! Your innocent inquisition is fascinating: I was once A pubescent And my favorite line was What else can I do? ...............Thanks for sharing.....10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 February 2018

Thank you, Dr. Dillip for revisiting this poem. Your comment is a treasure.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 December 2017

Oh, the Pubescents their lives are full of wonders. You have amazingly expressed your views here in this poem. They say nothing but they say many things. They answer that they do not know but they know every aspects of life here. Brilliant sharing is done...10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 December 2017

Thank you, Kumarmani for your great comments and the insights.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 December 2017

What else can I do Pragmatic expression.. liked it very much Thanks for sharing

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 December 2017

Thank you, Dr.Dillip for the visit and great comment.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

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