When you ask them,
"What are you doing"?
They say,
"Nothing".
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Magnificently expressed! .. As such an age is heartwarming, defiant, confusing, and yet filled with wonder! ..
Well written piece. You gals know better. A new life, new revelation I suppose. Nice one on female life 10+
Oh, the Pubescents/Their lives/Are full of wonders....wonderful ending! My pleasure reading this excellent piece again and again!
I was once A pubescent And my favorite line was " What else can I do " ? a very fine poem.. wonderful psychological observation. thank u dear poetess. tony
Like buds about to blossom, they fill the life with fresh colours and there is not a dull moment. A lovely poem
Pubescence has vital influence on body and mind. In this stage what a person dreams is astutely inscribed in this poem which is much interesting. The last stanza is much impressive in this concern.
Read this poem again. I think Pubes-cents are better than those who claim they know everything and they can do anything.
An incisive and impressive inscription has been made on the Pubescent that attracts the reader for which I have reviewed for second time. The lines those touch me much are.....When you tell them This is what you gonna do. They quickly say, We absolutely know.
We absolutely know. - In my pubescent, I do not recall ever having thought so. But today's pubescent indeed think so. A nice poem, with well articulated thoughts on a contemporary topic.
As we grow our mind follows slowly at first then in leaps and bounds. Sorry, for my cliched response but this is what came out of my mind.+++10
A pubescent is one who is about to open his eyes as an. His wonders should be ignored until he/she becomes a matured. A nice psychological observation of a pubescent.
A wonderful poem Rose! Your innocent inquisition is fascinating: I was once A pubescent And my favorite line was What else can I do? ...............Thanks for sharing.....10
Thank you, Dr. Dillip for revisiting this poem. Your comment is a treasure.
Oh, the Pubescents their lives are full of wonders. You have amazingly expressed your views here in this poem. They say nothing but they say many things. They answer that they do not know but they know every aspects of life here. Brilliant sharing is done...10
Thank you, Kumarmani for your great comments and the insights.
What else can I do Pragmatic expression.. liked it very much Thanks for sharing
Ever so heart touching! .. An amazing write! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++++