Thursday, April 16, 2009

The Protector Comments

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Her presence is not wanted until she’s there.
Always putting everyone before herself, but ne’er
Was she appreciated. Her heart hurt everyday.
Even though she loved to help in any way,
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Ashleigh Michaud
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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 May 2020

Even though she loved to help in any way, She wishes someone would take care of her..Perceptional expression of love should never hurt rather it should care with deeper sense of love. This poem is very interestingly penned with brilliant mind...10

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~ Jon London ~ 17 April 2009

Emotional lines, strength of the heart come through with a sense of pride. Nicely penned

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