~the Protagonist Comments

I love this piece

This is an absolute masterpiece. The wordplay as well as the layout of the recurring theme is spot-on. This has allowed me to appreciate your feedback on my own work all the more. Thank you so much, and keep up the amazing work.

Shahzia Batool(1/9/2014 3: 59: 00 PM) what can we call this poem...a poetic narrative or an allegorical fable with a meaningful depth related to man's life... Plenty is not happiness; forgiveness is its meaning...right observation of the protagonist with this end: I'll forgive the selfish world; I'll forgive all greedy men. But I'll not pat their backside or walk into their den.' very deep poem!

This is the second poem on my favorites list. You do have the knack of writing real poetry. I still envy your talent! Write On!