Tuesday, August 30, 2005

***the Proposal Comments

Rating: 4.7

Who will marry me, said the flea,
Why ever should I, said the fly,
I would willingly give you a hug, said the bug,
That would be nice, said the wood lice,
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Ernestine Northover
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Simone Inez Harriman 15 November 2015

I love this poem. Very clever pen Ernestine. I very much enjoyed reading.

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Terry Donovan 23 July 2006

Hi. This is very clever and well put together. I imagine you had fun writing it!

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Duncan Wyllie 05 April 2006

Wonderful we could take this even further but this seems to have captured it perfectly. Love Duncan

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Eve Clements 06 February 2006

Thanks for your comments, Ernestine. And thank you for pointing me to The Proposal. I love it's rhythm. Hoping to read all of your poems when I get time. Eve x

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Peter A. Crowther 30 August 2005

I expect the weevil thought her too evil :)

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