Who will marry me, said the flea,
Why ever should I, said the fly,
I would willingly give you a hug, said the bug,
That would be nice, said the wood lice,
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Hi. This is very clever and well put together. I imagine you had fun writing it!
Wonderful we could take this even further but this seems to have captured it perfectly. Love Duncan
Thanks for your comments, Ernestine. And thank you for pointing me to The Proposal. I love it's rhythm. Hoping to read all of your poems when I get time. Eve x
I love this poem. Very clever pen Ernestine. I very much enjoyed reading.