The Promised Land Comments

Great imagery crafted very passionately with wonderful words.......I loved the whole concept.....thanks for sharing

A thought provoking poem from your pen. I loved reading every lines...... We are tempted to step into unvisited paradise. Tempting looks very beautiful from far. but when we step into it, we come to know the realities, which we too find in hanging like puppet. A puppet of time... This poem carries a beautiful message. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.