The Promised Land Comments

Being treated like animals... under the hot African sun Locked in cages and treated brutally When would all this be over? / a place almost like heaven With green pastures / Finding a place where honey and milk flow.... //.... This is indeed a very powerful poem which presents the dystopian and the utopian sides of a man's life. This shows how life sucks. Thanks.

Ama, I truly enjoyed this poem. This poem should be used in fighting for rights of the immigrants in their found promised land.

Nice one Ama dear, I see you improving everyday. I'm proud of you. Well done.

I think this is AmaZing! ! ! Wow, I still can’t believe how well you conjure images and emotions with your words. Please continue to share your gift with us. Use your incredible talent to educate, comfort and inspire the world.

Keep thinking. Keep writing. Your voice is emerging.

Olisa Okigbo It is so nice and smart.