Friday, April 20, 2012

The Promise And The Curse Comments

Rating: 5.0

Asleep, your quiet breathing in the dark
Assures me in my life that all is well.
The closeness of your body next to mine,
The softness of your skin, your fragranced smell.
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Neil Godden
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James Gaskin 03 July 2016

Really eloquent! I can totally relate!

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Valerie Dohren 09 July 2012

What a beautiful poem, a lovely write. Captivating read.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 06 May 2012

The first three stanzas were absolutely beautiful... moving on to a fully descriptive part of night thought. Really very enjoyable..

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Neil Godden

Neil Godden

Kent, England
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