Friday, March 23, 2018

The Promise Comments

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The orphans's favourite haunt was the bridge,
decrepit and crescent shaped
like the half moon above.
When the dreaded time came for parting
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Kwai Chee Low
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Jazib Kamalvi 23 March 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Kwai. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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kwai chee low 23 March 2018

Thank you. Glad you like it.

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Cigeng Zhang 23 March 2018

The Bridge is an imagery as the connection to the past.Some old memories like the water under the bridge flowed back again. A beautiful poem as usual.

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kwai chee low 23 March 2018

Yes, Cigeng, the bridge connects to the past. I was inspired by the real life story of a daughter who was given up for adoption 20 years ago and where she and her biological parents met again. She was from your homeland.

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