The Promise Comments

A good start with a nice poem, Shilpi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

Dear Shilpi this is a very nice combination of the gradual learning process in the world it is a mixture of good and bad. Thanks for sweet composition. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

Superb! .....................so loving lines............keep it up.

waww! What a passionate, emotional and loving poem, u get it good keep it up.

hey dear where r u now a days....why dont u wrote some more interesting poems... love the poem very much

this world is still fair as you see. a nice poem

That is a true account of friendship portrayed very well. The poem was well meaning and reminded of my own best friend. Beautiful indeed... Why don't you write more? One poem doesn't suit your caliber :)

u r seemingly promising poetess.....explore ur poetic skills and entertain the readers more like us...poignant write...well done

Very elegant.., luved it....8-)

well two words came striking when i read this work of yours.. Elegance and Innocence.. :) .. Keep improving.. You definitely have something within.. :)

So you wish to become am English lit. Prof.? I really don't get any pleasure telling you that first you better concentrate on syntax and grammar, very much I'm afraid. In your poem-just to point out a single item-you changed tenses twice in the first 2 lines. You have to learn consistency in that regard: it is quite important. Also, simply by meaning well does not a good poem make. Read, read, read, the greatest poets before beginning to write. I spent many years in the library reading hundreds of anthologies and individual compilations before I thought I could even begin without avoiding pretension.

I am highly impressed by this excellent and well penned write which clearly reveals the very essence of FRIENDSHIP and LOVE! I honestly hope that this is your stepping stone towards your future in the Poetry World! You got what it takes to make it happen: TALENT! Go for it my friend! You are not alone. We are behind you to guide you! Keep inspiring the World, it is worthy! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! ..

quite passionate write, yet ingeniously carved over rune of hope, keep on writing...

have u written only one poem? I am sure that youy have ample caliber to reach the extreme.Try to go ahead stpo not till the goal is reached.

thanks for depicting the selfish song of modern people......i'm longing for a friend like u hu knows the tender purposes of humanlife, , , , , will u b my frnd?

good one....really one of the very good poem i have read on PH : -)

hey my sweet friend this poem is as sweet as u.....and am so happy this came from ur heart n abt freindship which is the best bond in this earth.. keep it up sweetu.. 10++++++