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Sunday, October 21, 2007

The Promise Comments

Rating: ★3.5

I hold the stone
close to my mouth
I kiss it ever so soft
I opened my hands
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 24 May 2008

the promise would prevails...........hopefully.

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Kory Beach 21 October 2007

Sorry, man, but I just don't like it. Maybe it's just my sense of taste in poetry that doesn't like love poems, but it is just missing something... you know best though.

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Stef Mighty Moshin Emo Rangers 21 October 2007

aww...thats beautiful, jordan! i give this a 100%

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