Wednesday, October 26, 2011

The Prologue Of Breath Comments

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Heaven is Hell, upside down
Wherever you view it, will be your crown
Paint the jewels in a color
In amorphous arms, keep you in slumber
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Kevin Patrick
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Stefanie Fontker 27 October 2011

I really enjoyed reading this. You offer some very interesting metaphors, beautiful work, as always.

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Shadow Girl 27 October 2011

nice flow and thoughtful write..i like it.

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