Friday, April 10, 2009

The Prodigal Son Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was after dusk, there was no one else around to see
The crime scene with the villain trying to flee
Except the young lad clicking on his camera furiously
Hidden in the shadows and moving noiselessly
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Sandra Martyres
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Miriam Maia Padua 21 April 2009

very powerful thoughts clever words flowing hope everybody could read and listen by heart... evocative write, concept with depth 10+++++

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Barry A. Lanier 15 April 2009

an evocative write and warning, , , , , , to those listening

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the enforcement of law if it is with the criminal..we should be prepared for democracys funeral..this poem pictures the real like incidents happening here...even if the criminal is caught the father would bargain and prchase..every body has a price

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Anjali Sinha 12 April 2009

very true exactly what happens if you dont have a godfather in politics- excellent write A+10 anjali

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