the problem is the trend.
oh, if you get rid of that complex of trend.
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Ibraheem, oh, I know the problem there. I know of a quite a few 'others' that I would like to see vanquished from my life. Lovely rhythmic flow to this piece. Just made me want to read and digest every word that you had written. Beautiful, my friend. Top marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David
Dear 'Ibrahim, ' I really, really, really like this poem; I enjoyed reading it greatly. thank you for this gift of a poem you gave to us here on PH. I am going to quote the names on here, from now on, because I know you're the same person, or possibly 2 or 3, 'persons' on here. So I shall use quotations. I remember that, 'you.' I remember your obsessing over me, in a loving way, and you would give me advice. I am touched you feel I touched your life that much. I am a very strong person, and for someone to point out such a degree of complexity almost scares me. You seem to know me well. Keep writing. ~Sarah (Marlayna)