Tuesday, October 27, 2009

# # The Prize Comments

Rating: 3.0

I have nothing to prove to anyone
I am neither proud nor ashamed
I will run at my pace
I’m not in a race
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Sonya Florentino
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 02 November 2009

I have nothing to prove to anyone I am neither proud nor ashamed great! ..................................................

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Susan Jarvis 29 October 2009

This poem races along with the staunch determination of an athlete - and certainly deserves 'The Prize'. A multi-layered and thought provoking read, with attitude! S :)

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Lorenzo Costigliolo 28 October 2009

Makes me want to slow down and realize that lif is not a race to the finish but a gentle glide, a slow gait to enjoy what life has to offer in Nature, people, and all the emotions therein.

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Kesav Easwaran 28 October 2009

Your prize is in your pride...your pride is in your words...your words in your poem...your poem in pride wins my prize... Hope, hop-step- and jumping over despair pit...a prize jump...good work...10

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Rakesh Bedi 28 October 2009

well said, dear...... but, easier said than done, isn't it? ? ?

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Patti Masterman 27 October 2009

There sure are some well hidden emotional springs underlying this; the bedrock that is the basis of the determination. One has no doubt that the outcome will be precisely as planned..(smile)

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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