The Prisoner - Tanka Comments

Meaningful Tanka.Imprusonment makes one unhappy though it is in a cage made of gold

It sounds like my wife! : )))))))))))))))))))))

The ending phrase reminds once again how the heart remains. Well wrtten piece

Such love/sorrow only hurting both of them... When love should be free, compassionate and kind...

An ever so heart moving poem that's ever so sad! .. Brilliantly expressed! .. Definite Definite 10 Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++

Sad yet true....a thought provoking write

Today this poem is ranked #39 in the Best Member Poems list on PoemHunter. Congratulations, Rose Marie. I am sure, this poem deserves better treatment. All the best

Again, congratulations to Rose Marie. This poem has already found a place in Best Member Poems. Expect better ranking in the coming days

Nice tanka. Beautifully crafted. Top score

brilliant Rose-Marie Wonderful

Thank you dearest friend Rose for a gem like this in your treasure chest of poems.....Top score and to my favourite

What is life - without any love or light? A powerful poem to think, reflect and contemplate.

A wonderful piece of poetry with poignant content. The moment anything is imprisoned it completely loses its joy of freedom.

All creatures were meant to be free. Stirring, powerful and brilliantly written.

Perfect. Terse peom.

2) Very sad, but greatly insightful piece of poetic writing.

To imprison, or be imprisoned, is an injustice to both parties. The awareness, if acted upon, leads to freedom. And freedom...leads to joy.

A succinct gem of a piece. A forced love cannot bring happiness. A fact that is quite common in the world. Often relationships are troubled.

none can build an abode of love forcefully; nonce can make a conjugal life forcefully; nice to read

Free him not let him be a prisioner! The choice is yours. Nice Tanka poem, Rose Marie