Wednesday, January 7, 2009

The Prison Poem. Comments

Rating: 4.9

a night with out stars,
another day i must face behind bars,
no visits, no calls,
im trapped inside these four walls,
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JOSE MURGUIA
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Dr. Kolitha Lelwala 14 January 2009

wonderful word painting with rhymes all over. You have a good tallent in poetry, no doubt about it.. I wonder why this voting only upto 10 lol... soooo 10++++++++

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Oscar Cantu 08 January 2009

sometimes when your alone is when you start digging deep in your soul good job!

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Blue Eyes 07 January 2009

it did make me cry.and thx for sharing.

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Vinod Kumar 07 January 2009

the toughest punishment of a living thing is to prevent its movement, it is we called imprisonment, A good poem The great Nelson Mondela is imprisoned about 28 years, including 4 years individual custody without see any co prisioners. just imagine! . thank you your poem. Regards, Vinod.

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