Monday, October 31, 2016

The Princess Of Joyabaj Comments

Rating: 4.2

Eyes that dance in circles of fire
Blackest discs of moonless nights
Float on burnished nutmeg leather,
A pool of whitest pearl surrounds
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Seamus O' Brian
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Pamela Sinicrope 04 November 2016

A Captivating depiction of the festival and dance of the Pincess of Joyabaj. The movement of your writing mimics the dancing and celebratory feeling of the event. Images like 'blackened discs of moonless nights' and feelings like 'tempting a hunger for what cannot be' and the 'cobbled stone streets' of the heart of the speaker in the poem put me right there in the scene. Lovely poem!

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Nosheen Irfan 03 November 2016

A great descriptive write. A work of sheer beauty and elegance. Delighted to read such beautiful poetry.10

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Seamus O Brian 03 November 2016

Thank you, Nosheen, I am truly humbled by your gracious encouragement. Thank you for taking the time to read and share. Have a beautiful day!

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