Saturday, March 24, 2018

The Princess' Kiss(Enclosed Tercet) Comments

Rating: 5.0

A noble Knight like all the rest
Although well bred, he'll die today
"Tell me, Wizard surely there's another way
Must love this poor Knight's honor slay
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Chris Embrick
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 April 2018

A fairy tale elegantly penned. Enjoyed reading it. A great piece.10

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Chris Embrick 03 April 2018

I need an occasional break and let my mind go a little crazy now and then. Thank you Rose Your comments are always greatly appreciated.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 March 2018

For love of Lady, one must endure. This fairy tale is definitely very interesting and excellently and beautifully this is presented. When the royal blood is poisoned dark, this challenges life and death and provokes thought. An amazing sharing is done here...10

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Chris Embrick 03 April 2018

I enjoy writing things from my imagination sometimes. These are my mini-novella poems. Always, kind friend your comments are deeply appreciated.

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