Monday, October 29, 2018

The Princess Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a luxurious shell,
An artificial paradise, a hell!
A soul with all comforts,
Imprisoned in the forts,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Mahtab Bangalee 12 November 2018

lovely poem A free bird, free to love even when flying, my sweet dove! /// lovely writings

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Aqua Flower 09 November 2018

To my favorites! 10! ! ! The real meaning to life! A relatable poem.

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Dave Walker 03 November 2018

When you find your one true love nothing else matters, true love will win over everything. A great write.

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Nadia Umber Lodhi 01 November 2018

e shine like Adam and Eve So like her grandest parents she decided to leave All the luxuries, titles and admirations To come out in the world with only her passions Much courage was needed for the.......nice sir

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 October 2018

The Poet must copy furnish the Princess. I am sure she will love and cherish this lovely poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 October 2018

Wow and another wow for this wonderful poem. Your imagination and power of your pen i are excellent. Powerful lines are embedded in this poem to convey how powerful love is. Another masterpiece. Beautifully crafted.10+++ and on to my Poem List.

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Kelly Kurt 30 October 2018

The inspiration for this poem was given at the end, and brought your words even more impact.

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M Asim Nehal 30 October 2018

Beauty of love is when it enters you shred all your ego and worldly luxuries, it makes you pure as honey and takes you to a world where only love exists and nothing else. A fantastic poem.10+

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 October 2018

Akhtar, such a lovely poem....10++++++++++++++

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