Thursday, May 25, 2017

The Prince- T222 Comments

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Ah! Ah! Ah! Sound reflected around
In the deep dense forest
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sekharan pookkat
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Geetha Jayakumar 08 August 2017

A Lovely tribute to king. Enjoyed reading the beautiful story from beginning till end. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 June 2017

A marvellous poem with thrilling expression. It is a great tribute to the king of Bundipur-Sunny T222 and to nature. Many thanks dear Pookkat for sharing this meaningful poem with us.

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Bharati Nayak 31 May 2017

A grand tribute to the king of forest, the big cat Sunny -T222. The beauty and grandeur of a royal presence is so nicely reflected in the poem.Then one can feel intimately through its words the sorrow and sadness at the passing away of the king of the forest, Sunny-T222.It is like a befitting obituary for a king. To quote from this wonderful poem- - He marked his territory and camouflaged Watched surroundings with his glittering eyes This seemed at night like a blue star And others frightened when it moved. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Hunters One second hesitated to cross his border But the body line and shooting range Became one sand same in point blank on that day And fire passed through his head brutally. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Squirrels, monkeys, leopards, herds of bison Gave him a big salute and prayed for his soul Keeping their friendship of the forest Stood for a moment like dolls engraved in mud! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - The poem lastly highlights how the brutality of man tragically upsets the balance and beauty of nature.

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Unwritten Soul 31 May 2017

Beautiful journey, feel like in rainforest walk when I read this... :)

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Sekharan Pookkat 02 June 2017

life is precious for all creatures - thanks for your comments

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Hazel Durham 30 May 2017

Wonderful write embroidered beautifully with the splendour of nature, a feast of a story and the tragedy that enfolds!

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Sekharan Pookkat 30 May 2017

thank you hazel- I mean This poem - My eyes plays while typing -

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Bisy Untan 29 May 2017

The Prince-T222 is a true dedication to the Nature. The picturesque description is wonderful. The first duty of man is to Nature. Greedy man always forgets it. Thank you.

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Sekharan Pookkat 30 May 2017

Thank a lot for sparing time to read my poem and for your inspiring words

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Nice experience with watching the bird.

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Sekharan Pookkat 30 May 2017

it gives me pleasure

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Rini Shibu 27 May 2017

Nice poem with a story in it..life of nature drastically reduced

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Sekharan Pookkat 30 May 2017

read another poem and comment

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