The Prince Of Night Comments

It's your seeds of love that now I am going to sow, beautiful depiction by imagery! , thanks for sharing

Very nice and meaningfull poem.

Highly imaginative. I enjoyed the read. Leonard

IT'S UR SEEDS OF OVE THAT I AM NOW GOING TO SOW... WOW...! ! ! MARVELLOUS LINES...

imagination is superb and i liked the concluding line- One day the Princess catches him and says'Why are you feeling low? It's your seeds of love that now I am going to sow! ' its so inspiring and sounds like the fact of life and lives.

I felt that I was going through a nice fairy tale. Beautiful combination of imagination and language power.

The central theme is very good but the poem could be more poetic really. Thanks, arya

Wonderful write. I like it. Peace out, Lexi Baby.

good poem. good ending too. but you could have used a bit of rhyming words, only if that was your type of writing. anyway, keep on writing.

I liked this poem. Very good imagination. Best wishes to the poet.

I enjoyed reading this lovely poem, very heart-warming tale, 10 for you Lynda xx

very beautiful koyel..your name & poem both.. nice feelings.. read mywork also.. please keep writing... :)

Enjoyed the tongue-in-cheek naughtiness of this. It sure says a lot about today's woman. She will go after what she wants to leave the man very much the nonbeliever. AND, the 'willing' victim of shared lusts. lol The Prince of Night captivates because of its unsuspected conclusion. Nice work, koyel.

Quite a delightful story. Hugs, Dee

A lovely story and very well written too. Best wishes, Andrew

dream in which all believe.....a dream of a prince....i liked it...absolute on the rhyme....i liked the last two line.....about love seed....

good imagination! enjoyed reading it...!

Well done and a well told story.

Hi Koyel. Certainly interesting with a great deal of imagination which is just what you need for good storytelling in rhyme. well done **10** Regards Dave T

hey you must have groomed urself on a strong dose of fairy tales! i went back to my childhood days!