Saturday, May 20, 2017

The Prince From Faraway Land Comments

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He came to me like a dream,
A luminous visage, with green eyes,
Like lightening in the darkness, he smiles.
His voice plays on my mind like a musical tune,
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Rehnuma Tarannum
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Unnikrishnan E S 02 June 2017

Good Morning Ms Rehnuma, Very poignant poem. On a dream, Prince Charming! With a philosophical inclination. Loved reading this beauty.. He is the one who... He overwhelms me with his charm, ! ! And He is the prince, who rides car, not horse, And her recognition that... Of all my happiness, He is the source. His physical appearance, attire: No crown, but Sun shines bright on his head, And the soulful effect of his presence on her: I feel alive and soulful under his shade. And finally, what does he do to her? ? ? As He keeps my heart running and warm. Wow! ! ! ! ! What a write! ! 10+++ And to mypoemslist...

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Rehnuma Tarannum 05 June 2017

thank you dear poet.

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