The Prince And The Pearl Comments
She is on the hard road of mood swings
Darkness invading her green eyes,
Her untamed wild auburn hair springs into curls,
She wishes for poker straight hair,
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line 12, its well, here i am, in America. i haven't seen you yet. when are you going to find ME? ! to MyPoemList bri :)
She's not looking for you, Bri. Nobody is looking for you except the IRS, the county sheriff, and the California Highway Patrol. Hahahahahahahah!
The land of freedom throws her a lifeline, The prince and pearl will find their time For love and kindness in their prime. very fine emotional poem full of hope for a better life. there is yearning and hope in your fine poem.. thank u dear poetess Hazel.. tony
Soul mate searching With a happy ending The prince of the land of freedom Welcomes the pear of his dream ... excellent piece!
Nice flow of the story is drawn with touching expression. Though there is sadness and yearning yet there is hope of nice days and freedom. Let it be quoted. . . As her hair coils and springs into untamed curls, The prince will find his pearl, Pearl of the mighty Atlantic ocean, With flames of emotions, The land of freedom throws her a lifeline, The prince and pearl will find their time For love and kindness in their prime. Thanks for sharing.
I hope she finds him- she has such verve how can we help but hope she gets a happy ending to her story. A fun read as well as an on the edge of your seat read. I wouldn't mind a happy dream or two myself! ! ! Good lively read
Nicely composed so that the readers to feel the doubts and vibrations of the soul's fears and hopes for a better future.
A lovely enchanted story we all hope that one day our prince will come ;) keep on dreaming. Annette
A sense of deep yearning is beautifully projected in this poem! May this dream be realized! Spontaneous flow of sweet emotions!
A very strong deep tale of sadness and yearning Hazel but it is also filled with hope and new found energy for better days to come. A very inspiring write for the New Year ahead. Have a good one Hazel! Kind regards, Mick.
A prince of light. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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7/27/2025 2:55:39 AM # 1.0.0
Dreams are good. Without dreams, nothing would ever be accomplished. Very nice poem, Hazel. However, Bri Edwards is correct. In line 12 the word should be ITS instead of IT'S. Change that and your poem is nearly perfect.