The Price To Pay Comments

Hi you have commented some of my poems before and told me to take a look at yours. Ive read most of your poems and I just love them. You are a very good poet and I can't wait for you to put more poems up on here. Please read some of mine and comment them any advice you can give me would be great too. Keep up the good work.' Katie

it is not everyday that one gets a wise and spiritual preach from a guy. and you are right, this piece is filled with insight.

'Redemption does not come easily For no one can ever pay enough To live forever And never see the grave This is the fate of fools' these lines really struck me...very well expressed

Ogunleye, only 20... the wisdoms invoked here are due to your ravaged homeland.... how sad that you have/are paying the price, may you find peace in your lifetime....

'They may name their estate after them selves' You could have put these two words together to make themselves. But over all the rest of the poem was very good! 'write on'

Indeed, words of truth! This is why eventually man ought to abolish that invention from the times of that Babylonian tower - money - altogether!