Tuesday, November 20, 2012

The Price To Pay Comments

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This blackness wrapped around my soul will never go away,
It's blind eternal torture is the price that I must pay.
These prison bars are forged from lies, it's walls from infamy,
To pace these floors, and corridors, my endless destiny.
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 21 November 2012

the poem has the great flow of sincerity, so it looks great!

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Kelvin Owusu 20 November 2012

a great piece and a great message, good job

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