Wednesday, November 26, 2008

The Pretentious Carter Comments

Rating: 4.5

A beautiful day in spring
And the carters get on their way
To chop and fetch and carry wood
As is their job
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Alexander Steen Stewart
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Greenwolfe 1962 08 December 2008

This is philosophy. I love philosophy. I like your style. You had rhyme. It read well. Though it had only a small rhythm to it. The content was excellant. Meaning very clear. I give it an 8 and a recommendation. Nice.

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Dedrick Estiltaph 03 December 2008

I enjoyed it. I really liked the line about indviduality. I think that's a great observation.

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Fay Slimm 27 November 2008

This is very well metred and lined, also the flow reads smoothly. the subject chosen is attention grabbing too.....well done Alex.

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Business Hippie 26 November 2008

nice *******************SPAM********************************** Cheeky London poet seeks comments and opinions (good or bad) *******************SPAM**********************************

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Alexander Steen Stewart

Alexander Steen Stewart

Falkirk, Central Scotland
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