A beautiful day in spring
And the carters get on their way
To chop and fetch and carry wood
As is their job
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I enjoyed it. I really liked the line about indviduality. I think that's a great observation.
This is very well metred and lined, also the flow reads smoothly. the subject chosen is attention grabbing too.....well done Alex.
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This is philosophy. I love philosophy. I like your style. You had rhyme. It read well. Though it had only a small rhythm to it. The content was excellant. Meaning very clear. I give it an 8 and a recommendation. Nice.