Wednesday, January 25, 2017

The Pressure Of Singledom Comments

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The pressure of Singledom...

Trying to find a calming oasis
in the desert of my confusion
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Annette Aitken
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Anthony Burkett 31 January 2017

Your words have plucked a cord on my heart's strings... and I hear the sound of my own lament... I say, Yes! It's okay to be selfish... I think selfishness is the most accurate way that we are able to fully identify our innermost desires... A wonderful treatise on self value... I tip my hat to this one dear poetess...

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Tom Billsborough 30 January 2017

Your latest poems are showing a fine individualistic power. The French writer Malherbe said: I write for myself alone. Your song is yours and being selfish about that is very much OK. We, your friends, shall admire you at your chosen distance.

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Seamus O Brian 27 January 2017

Well written piece, Annette; when writing with such honesty, the force comes naturally, but sometimes the craftsmanship suffers. You carried it through with elegance and sincerity. Bravo. :) S

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 January 2017

This is beautiful poetry. Spilling emotion in a very positive way. Loved it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 January 2017

In the desert of my confusion. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bill Cantrell 25 January 2017

You will indeed find an oasis with date palms and waters of the clearest blue, when you lay upon the sand at night, the moon will come to you with a kiss of peace.... nice poem Annette, emotions in poetry so very well written!

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