Thursday, February 15, 2007

The Pressure Comments

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The pressure surrounds you
Sucking you in tighter and tighter
Til you can't breathe
The stress pulling at you
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Bonnie B Long
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Ray Lucero 15 February 2007

Bonnie, Your feelings come through strongly from your poem. Use those feelings to give you strength to do what you must. Knowing when to walk away is difficult but ultimately rewarding. Peace, Ray

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