Sunday, March 16, 2014

The Press Of Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

You already knew the wind speaks
in every language. Just listening
you feel dry bark scrap your skin.
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Daniel Brick
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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 December 2022

You see thin trees, wood chips, green leaves swaying in the cool air, bushes shaking and bending, ant hills scattered...magnificent. A great poem.

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Liza Sudina 12 November 2015

On still days the silence carries the wind's message. Without talking you point to every needed sign. - this poem is so pleasent for my ears! And one common wish in the end uplifts the spirit.

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Smoky Hoss 01 March 2015

As true now as it was a year ago, and will be a year from now. An eternal poem.

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Gajanan Mishra 16 March 2014

summer's first day, thanks, good one. Please read my poems and comment.

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St. Paul MN
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