Monday, September 1, 2008

The Present Burns Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'd like to give a little explanation before submitting this poem.
For the 18 months I've been battling with anorexia. I wrote the first verse whilst in the thick of it, and the second 6 months later, beginning to come out of the other end.
I'd appriciate feedback :)
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Ellie Sutton
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Walterrean Salley 26 December 2009

Hi Ellie. I hope you're continuing your struggle. Your poem is a desperate plea to be free. The power lies within the individual will (which shines throughout your poem) . With faith, a strong will, and the help of God, I know that you can beat the odds. Please continue the fight, and I will be praying for you. Thanks for sharing your heart. Take care. 10 (in case the system doesn't register my vote)

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Ella Marsland 26 November 2008

elo u proble dont no me but im in year 10 at wyrley, , i think ur poems amazin, , and i can relate to every word i suffer from anorexia and have been for the last 10 months 2bh i wish i was at the point were i feel better but to me it seems like the beggining i think ur so brave u can gt through it ur not alone and keep goin with the poems there brilliant, tried doing poems myself but there nothin like these. ella xx

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Tom Balch 01 September 2008

Ellie this is a wonderful, powerful piece, the pain is there for all to see, I dont know why Yoonoos never marks, its a 10 + from me regards Tom

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