Saturday, December 16, 2006

The Present Comments

Rating: 5.0

Famous lady will you come with me,
I would like to show you something.
Put on an ugly hat and glasses,
not meant to flatter you,
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Barry Van Allen
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Chuck Audette 18 April 2007

Past, present, future. Looking good here. Liked the little line 'slightly something else... ' I guess, for it's soft alliteration.. -chuck

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Dee Daffodil 21 January 2007

Wow! What a lovely romantic (did I say that) poem...This is really very beautiful! Do you really know of such a lake? ? Hugs, Dee

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