Tuesday, August 30, 2022

The Presence Of Nature Comments

Rating: 4.8

I love the scene that autumn brings,
The leaves of red and gold,
Nature changes outfits,
Preparing for the cold,
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Isadora Quagmire 16 June 2025

Beautifully written, great imagery too! ! !

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Bri Edwards 01 September 2022

Jayne, I gave it four stars. With a little , humour, and a mention of my name, I'd have given it five. I liked your rhymes. : )

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Jayne Louise Davies 01 September 2022

Thanks Bri. I appreciate your comments.

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Nabakishore Dash 31 August 2022

Last four lines are really true for our beautiful nature dear Mam.

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Jayne Louise Davies 01 September 2022

Thank you for your lovely comment x Much appreciated.

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Michael Cochrane 30 August 2022

A very lovely poem Jayne, well done.

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Jayne Louise Davies 01 September 2022

Thank you Michael. I appreciate your comments.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 30 August 2022

Wonderful expession of a time of year I, too, enjoy Bravo! ! !

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Jayne Louise Davies 01 September 2022

Thanks LeeAnn x Much appreciated.

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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