Uzefa Rashida M.A

Uzefa Rashida M.A

Pernambut, Vellore District, Tamil nadu, India
Tuesday, February 9, 2016

The Precious Comments

Rating: 4.2

Dry and yellow, the leaves when turn
They know that its time for them to return
They fall from the trees, right on the ground
Buried they get soon, never to be found.
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Uzefa Rashida M.A
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Sarah Shahzad 11 January 2020

this is powerful peace to read, I really enjoyed reading it..! Keep it up...! :)

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Sarah Shahzad 11 January 2020

Wow excellent...! ! This poetry is magnificent... glory be..peace.. :) just keep writing & sharing..

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Atashi Ghosh 15 March 2018

Brilliant usage of imagery from nature to describe the invaluable contribution of our parents in giving shape to our life.

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Aarzoo Mehek 18 March 2016

The circle of life continues as we step into their shoes we know the value of their sacrifices and love. God bless all the parents and keep them hale and healthy. beautiful poem Uzefa touchy to the core.10+++

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 17 March 2016

Guiding through the dark, clearing every path Seeing their child, in the rays of glory bath Selfless, loving, giving and sharing all that is theirs Our parents never ask for all that was theirs Verily and verily

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Aarifa Almas 14 March 2016

A perfect comparison and similarity between parents and trees... Both are selfless and caring and always ready to give, give and forgive...

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Susan Williams 28 February 2016

very well-done- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - They were born from the soil, tiny, shiny and green Looked towards the sun, growing from a bean They turned to be sturdy, strong and high Smiling at the clouds and birds that fly.

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 01 March 2016

Thank you dear Susan, your words of encouragement mean a lot to me

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M Asim Nehal 28 February 2016

Heartfelt poem............And life goes on like this, we all are puppets and with age we all will become weak and fragile and one day will say goodbye, those who have seen our birth will show us their death. Amusing.

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 01 March 2016

JazakAllah Asim Sahib for your warm and hearty comments.Your comments express your inner beautiful self.

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Akhtar Jawad 20 February 2016

A very impressive poem, lines appear to me like eyes and words like tears of a melted heart seeing the parents turned in yellow leaves that may fall at any time.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 February 2016

Born from the soil and, back to the soil. Nice piece of work.

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Seema Chowdhury 18 February 2016

very expressive and a meaningful write. you write from your heart. very well written.

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Seema Chowdhury 18 February 2016

very expressive and a meaningful write. you write from your heart.

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Anas Affan 18 February 2016

We never know the love of a parent till we become parents ourselves............thank you....it was so emotional for me.......Iam crying even though the tears are never falling from my eyes

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 19 February 2016

thank you Anas for reading my poem and sharing your views. I am happy that you found my poem so touching.

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Uzefa Rashida M.A

Uzefa Rashida M.A

Pernambut, Vellore District, Tamil nadu, India
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