Saturday, February 4, 2006

The Powerful Pacific Ocean Comments

Rating: 4.0

The ocean waves hello and
Beckons us to mists of wonder
It churns and turns and curls
Roaring out it's thunder
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Ray Andrews
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Joy Vanderhelm 04 February 2006

Concise but well made. I loved the brevity and the meter is good. Well done.

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Ernestine Northover 04 February 2006

What a lovely poem Ray, says so much in three short verses. Lovely feeling of the power and noise of the sea, and the coloured hues. Loved it. Love Ernestine XXX

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