Monday, November 16, 2009

The Power Of Pink Comments

Rating: 5.0

A dainty little girl skipped across the park
Dressed in pink from ribbons to shoes
Her Mother followed close behind
Not many people cast a glance at them
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Sandra Martyres
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Kesav Easwaran 30 November 2009

good story Sandra...and touching presentation too...melodramatic...10

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Nikunj Sharma 29 November 2009

Its true sometimes a scene, a thing, an incident, a child can bring happiness and change our lives....the heart reaches out and calls....very nice poem...thanks 4 sharing

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Sandra Fowler 28 November 2009

Extraordinary power indeed, the power of pink. A story of pure enchantment. I love the little girl's smile and the joy it brought to the troubled face of the man crippled by his memories.10/10. Very inspiring. Love, Sandra

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A beautifully told poem Sandra about a delightful little girl and a man who finds the symbolism of what he has lost through the little girl and the power of pink. I was entranced from beginning to end. 10 love Karin

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Meggie Gultiano 16 November 2009

here you are again in your best shot..you; re great in this kind, and I do love your style. a magnificent piece, Sandra. Love always, Meggie

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David Harris 16 November 2009

Sandra, what a beautiful sensitive story you have told us here with an uplifting effect that a colour can bring. Top marks and thanks for sharing it with us my friend. Hugs David

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Carol Gall 16 November 2009

fascinating sandra great story 10

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