I see the terrible haunted look in your frenzied eyes,
As you peer intensely into the magnifying glass
At the middle aged couple smiling in the picture,
I know the unhappiness you try to endure,
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The poem has many feelings inside it, of sorrow, happiness, solitude, glory. You also nicely detail the moment like it was a short movie in poetry that capture essence of story, emotions, reality and every little bit of them in a bowl for us to taste while reading it..to me it is wonderfup poem...It just dont think about past young time, but be forever young everytime to enjoy every moment you have now. No one is growing old but bodies not souls. love it
Throughout the Cosmos there is only one the most effective indestructible and more powerful that is love. Nicely penned and more soothing. Thanks for sharing. Regards +++++10
A person who has lost his soul which was his land, disturbs a lot. but as a whole the two different souls from two different places have had the same experiences; one might have lost something through the culture and the other through the hands of peace speaking war mongers...i would not know the scenes might have been very different., , At last love blooms in the hearts of two and it is a good feeling for readers like me..Thank you for sharing your thought Hazel
A soul find a soul another broken soul blooming to heal and healing to bloom wonderful
What a wonderful write, so full of expression, a lovely read... Annette
Two lost souls merged and a new love was born. Very nicely written Hazel... I'm a sucker for happy endings.....Best wishes for the future!
And I see the power of love.....hear the music and dance, sun healing and appealing.....10+++
No more loneliness in bed staring at a cold ceiling, We have the beauty of our entwined feelings, The haunted, you wanted a soul to find a soul, We strike out with the power of love so bold. A wonderful poem describing the power of love.
one of your best poems and it will be read over and over by poetry lovers all around the world mai
So life is made beautiful and meaningful with the alliance of two souls once equally lost! Again they don't have to lie lonely staring at the ceiling! They will be there for each other to share and care! Beautiful poem!
A poem of hope, of restoring hope, of accepting the person we love, unconditionally, and finally enjoying life's most precious gift to a human heart - its capacity to love and its endurance. An intense, soulful write.