Wednesday, April 7, 2010

The Power Of Love Comments

Rating: 4.5

As I saw her laying there,
I began to weep.
Tears were flooding my face
For a reason I could not explain.
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Andrew D Robertson
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Richard D. Remler 27 April 2010

I read the title and the first thing I thought of was the Huey Lewis song. This however is nothing like it. Seeing a girl and starting to weep...I'm not sure exactly what could cause that. Guess she could have snagged your bank card and withdrew a few hundred from your account. I don't get the 'glamorous' in the poem, seems more fitting for a catalogue. Other than my few complaints it was an interesting read. I think I'd have growled slightly louder had she stolen my bank card. And her dissapearing into the night. I sense a Nancy Grace headline.

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