Sunday, January 24, 2010

The Power Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Early on: the radiance morning sun
infusing space and exposing me unbound
I lay beside him, marveling aura waltzing
behind my eyelids
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Almedia Knight-Oliver
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Dr Antony Theodore 29 September 2018

Beguiled by the charm of his dreamy eyes my heart swelled and trembled like the heart of a captive bird, just then I knew my heart had been captured again! beautiful expressions of love and deep and intense romance.. lovely poem. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 October 2015

the heart of a captive bird, fully pregnant with your love: ecstatic tears Come into my paradise Committing to the power of love.. so many wonderful expressions that your poetic mind visualizes. amazing poem. thank you tony

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Concievable love. What a power poem. Excellent!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 11 February 2010

Oliver should be proud of you Almedia.A power poem!

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Obinna Eruchie 06 February 2010

This love poem does shows the power of love that glows with warmth between the voice and her love. Beautiful and deep!

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Obinna Eruchie 06 February 2010

This love poem does shows the power of love that glows with warmth between the voice and her love. Beautiful and deep!

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 30 January 2010

there are morals and virtues presented between the lines... nice poem!

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Eyan Desir 30 January 2010

Sounds romantic well written

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Steven S 28 January 2010

My friend you have written a lovely poem here, thanks for sharing the love. -Steve

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Ken E Hall 26 January 2010

The power of love expressed by the power of love stiched together with arms around each other there is no end to this kind of love++++ regards

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 25 January 2010

This is really a beautiful poem, Almedia. The glow of love is eternal and the power of love is undeniable. Warm Regards. Naseer

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John Knight 25 January 2010

Hi Almedia - This is beautiful a real 'Victorian Love Poem'. I score it TEN for its vibrant 'Free Verse Flow' and its awesome content. V 1 Is an elegant poetic tribute to the 'power of love' between a Lady and her chosen (its always the ladies who do the choosing) Man - BEAUTIFUL. V 2 A wonderful poem about the agony and ecstacy of pregnancy - PERFECT. V 3 A real 'Old fashioned' dedication of your love for your man! promises - dedication - commital - love - power - LOVELY. 'At last i'm ready to commit - to the power of love............ NOW here is my hand - my heart - one love - forever - forever - forever - my soul mate. Thanks for sharing Almedia. Love in Poetry - JOHN

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Marieta Maglas 25 January 2010

wonderful metonymy I’m pregnant with your love excellent lyric poem...perfect feelings....undestroyable emotional connection....this poem is an extraordinary love lesson.... 10/10

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Busting with beauty that is painted with the colours of love.Well done my friend! 10+ Howard Simon The Motivational Poet

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Kuji Soliman 25 January 2010

Awww this is so romantic, sweet, and nice! ! this warm poem melted my heart of ice! ! May love conquer all for even more years.. Conquer every evil..and every single fear! ! (a little something to thank you for sharing this poem! :) I'm really happy for you and Claude! : D)

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Chitra - 24 January 2010

resonant imagery of love and commitment. I am extremely happy for you and Claude Sir. May the power of your love grow stronger and stronger!

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Lady Grace 24 January 2010

and the whispers as answer to every silent shout...and the cruelty under sleepless nights...that is love....that is the true love....owwwww....ur piece is as romantic as u...hope my words are just be fine..thanks for inviting dear....

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it is a wonderful love my dear lady. i love the way you ended it.

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