Thursday, January 29, 2009

~the Power Of A Tear~ Comments

Rating: 4.6

Pounds of pain punctured my progress
Tons of trouble terminated my tranquility
Swarms of stress subtracted my substance
My heart exploded like a thousand thunders
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Marlena Wilke 13 October 2022

This poem is absolutely one of a kind! So much emotion and fearfulness, wow, thank you so much for sharing xoxo

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BRI EDWARDS 26 November 2021

I LOVE 'GOOD' ALLITDERATIOHS. THIS POEMS PROVIDES PLENTY, POET. THANKS. AND....I GUESS IT CARRIES A MESSAGE AS WELL. ;) BRI

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Ibtissam Ibrahim 06 August 2021

good poem.. go a head

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Brave Hearts 06 April 2021

Great writing

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Brave Hearts 06 April 2021

'A tear Seasoned with the salt of reality rescued me from insanity'

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Beena Antony Kakkanattu 12 March 2021

Though lengthy poem.. A marvelous piece

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Jaishree Nair 18 February 2021

No words to express my feelings... Brought tears to my eyes literally.Thank you

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Jaishree Nair 18 February 2021

No wonder

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Kevin Patrick 02 January 2021

Absolutely stupendous work, tears are not confessions of weakness, but floodgates of which we release our humanity and our compassion, we become strong in embracing that humanity. Thank you so much!

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Luo Zhihai 08 September 2020

Seasoned with the salt of reality The taste of life is sweet and salty...

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M Asim Nehal 21 August 2020

I feel you have immortalized the tears by writing this poem. The list of qualities are never ending which is very true.100 /10 for this poem.

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Suzon Albert 21 August 2020

Nothing can be better than this tear poem. Awesome poem 10++++ A tear Tearing down walls of internal imprisonment Building beautiful bridges of betterment A tear Providing homeostasis Averting my crisis A tear Seasoned with the salt of reality Rescued me from the claws of insanity

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 August 2020

Nice one.. loved it.. clear 10 No tears from Saturday,15th August 2020 life has relevance and it is gifted chance one must understand the concept and prompt for useful acts Dr Jadia Hasmukh

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Bharati Nayak 20 May 2020

A tear Seasoned with the salt of reality Rescued me from the claws of insanity A tear Flowing directly from the tear in my soul Anchoring my feet and making me whole A tear Much thanks to you my dear tear You are the reason I'm still here - - - -A marvelous write, thanks for sharing.

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Ms Doubtfire 01 January 2020

Probably got it finally. Silence is the answer. Glad you found it.

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Panagiota Romios 06 December 2019

Mahnicently penned. I Could feel this. Thank you.

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A B Faniki 01 September 2019

Brilliant words play with rhyme n rhythm frm a creative mind. I love it is well versed n great

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Iftekhar Ifti 13 August 2019

Much thanks to you my dear tear You are the reason I'm still here, Nice

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Pounds of pain punctured my progress Tons of trouble terminated my tranquility Swarms of stress subtracted my substance My heart exploded like a thousand thunders My mind melted and my spirit splintered Hanging by a thread destined to burst

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Mahtab Bangalee 06 May 2019

Music tried to massage me out of my misery But though the words were so wonderful And the melody so moving and majestic Misfortune only mushroomed and multiplied........./// ow what fabulous writings; another great poem

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