Pounds of pain punctured my progress
Tons of trouble terminated my tranquility
Swarms of stress subtracted my substance
My heart exploded like a thousand thunders
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I LOVE 'GOOD' ALLITDERATIOHS. THIS POEMS PROVIDES PLENTY, POET. THANKS. AND....I GUESS IT CARRIES A MESSAGE AS WELL. ;) BRI
'A tear Seasoned with the salt of reality rescued me from insanity'
No words to express my feelings... Brought tears to my eyes literally.Thank you
Absolutely stupendous work, tears are not confessions of weakness, but floodgates of which we release our humanity and our compassion, we become strong in embracing that humanity. Thank you so much!
Seasoned with the salt of reality The taste of life is sweet and salty...
I feel you have immortalized the tears by writing this poem. The list of qualities are never ending which is very true.100 /10 for this poem.
Nothing can be better than this tear poem. Awesome poem 10++++ A tear Tearing down walls of internal imprisonment Building beautiful bridges of betterment A tear Providing homeostasis Averting my crisis A tear Seasoned with the salt of reality Rescued me from the claws of insanity
Nice one.. loved it.. clear 10 No tears from Saturday,15th August 2020 life has relevance and it is gifted chance one must understand the concept and prompt for useful acts Dr Jadia Hasmukh
A tear Seasoned with the salt of reality Rescued me from the claws of insanity A tear Flowing directly from the tear in my soul Anchoring my feet and making me whole A tear Much thanks to you my dear tear You are the reason I'm still here - - - -A marvelous write, thanks for sharing.
Probably got it finally. Silence is the answer. Glad you found it.
Brilliant words play with rhyme n rhythm frm a creative mind. I love it is well versed n great
Much thanks to you my dear tear You are the reason I'm still here, Nice
Pounds of pain punctured my progress Tons of trouble terminated my tranquility Swarms of stress subtracted my substance My heart exploded like a thousand thunders My mind melted and my spirit splintered Hanging by a thread destined to burst
Music tried to massage me out of my misery But though the words were so wonderful And the melody so moving and majestic Misfortune only mushroomed and multiplied........./// ow what fabulous writings; another great poem
This poem is absolutely one of a kind! So much emotion and fearfulness, wow, thank you so much for sharing xoxo