Monday, April 25, 2011

The Pot Maker Comments

Rating: ★4.4

Unsteadily first revolves the pot maker’s wheel
With tremulous hands, he searches what’s not there.
His fingers reach out for mud and mud for him.
Emptiness forms on both sides of the mud
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subodh pandey
forgotten birds Emptiness
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Hazel Durham 13 October 2012

Beautiful imagery with great depth, inspired write!

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Linda May Fox 27 June 2012

What a beautiful poem and the message it portrays!

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Allemagne Roßmann 21 August 2011

His fingers reach out for mud and mud for him. Emptiness forms on both sides of the mud In the beautiful expanse of his patience, The tremulous hands now find a mouthpiece in your poetry.Nice portrayals.

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