Friday, January 11, 2013

The Porch Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I rock back and forth in my chair with ease
The trees began to sway with the sweet Summer breeze
Just thinking about what could have been
Deep thoughts of the things hidden deep within
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Patricia Grantham
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Theodora Onken 04 September 2013

I liked this - - do a lot of soul searching myself - often on the patio!

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Chandra Thiagarajan 12 August 2013

Lovely rocking in the porch and reminiscing and the conclusion is very apt. Brilliant Patricia!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 July 2013

When you ponder sitting in the porch on a rocking chair, you conclude Life is to love and cherish and not to destroy. Beautifully said.

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Valsa George 04 July 2013

Enjoy life while we can! Anxiety about the future is not going to make things any better, but really worse! Engaging in a pastime of one's choice will definitely help us rid of our nagging thoughts! Life is for us to love and cherish! A beautiful message that sinks into the depths, Patricia! Really enjoyed!

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Reetu Chopra 12 January 2013

good one! ! Appreciated

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Dave Walker 11 January 2013

A great poem, like it, a great write.

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Patricia Grantham

Patricia Grantham

Moncks Corner, South Carolina
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