the boy sits on the porch and cries,
the sky is grey, it weeps inside,
the sky feels pain, the clouds are wet,
they see the boy, they show their respect.
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Poetry seems to have been made to express the idea of loss, especially the loss of a loved one. Having the boy's emotions echo the disturbance in the weather works well here. Good work.
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Poetry seems to have been made to express the idea of loss, especially the loss of a loved one. Having the boy's emotions echo the disturbance in the weather works well here. Good work.