Monday, September 1, 2014

The Poor Child Comments

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She blames him,
He blames her,
And the child is stranded,
Mentally divided,
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Khalid Saifullah 12 April 2017

A story with a thoughtful message...................

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Valsa George 05 September 2014

You have pictured a situation that we witness all around! Children brought up in nuclear families have no one else to look for love other than his parents! If they are at loggerheads with each other, the child will be frustrated and it is quite natural that he turns to other sources for entertainment! His preoccupation with computers and internet makes him advance in mental age! He comes to know of many things, he should have never known at his age! With no guidance, he is likely to travel off the track! A poem with much food for thought!

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Ramesh Rai 03 September 2014

It is more nourishing for any children when they see their parents loving each other. i have observed most of children being drug addicted due to separation of their parents. May be there is enough money but they dont have love in their life.A great message is conveyed through this poem.

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Rajkamal P.j 03 September 2014

Heart breaking write..What would be the fate of today's technology privileged and other ordinary children is a big question when there own parents show the wrong ways of life especially in today's nuclear families. If attitudes are not changing it could be a ' nuclear catastrophe 'in the offing..

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 02 September 2014

Lovely indeed and a lesson on carelessness - How can you expect, From the child who has read, Love letters of his parents, Colorful fragrant, And is watching now differences, The rash exchanges, Shall he be socialized, As a normal man! lovely sir

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 September 2014

Thoughtful write from your pen. Very true said, everything has changed and is still changing along with the time. Though children are addicted to internet, they learn a lot more than they should know. communication between parents and children also take place in phones. everyone is busy in their fast life. Todays lifestyle changed the youngsters life too. Loved the way you presented each lines.

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Md Asadullah 02 September 2014

Poor child, I pity him, may God help, your concern nicely portrayed in this poem: (

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Salini Nair 02 September 2014

as time changes human mind and lifestyle also changes......................nice sir...........

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Khalida Bano Ali 01 September 2014

For the sake of their children should consider twice before separation. A great message.

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