Saturday, October 7, 2017

The Pond And The Stream Comments

Rating: 5.0

The rain came down and filled the pond
The fishes came in and so came the frogs;
The duck with her ducklings swam around
The pond was filled with quakes and corks.
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Khirod Dalpati
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Naphtali Topno 22 June 2020

nice fish and the pond story.. it took me back to my school days..... felt good reading

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 October 2017

The summer came, the stream flowed by Its water was as clear as crystal shown; A tired and thirsty traveler came passing by Quenched his thirst and blessed the Lord.. loved these lines. Beautiful presentation on Pond and Stream. Thanks.

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Khirod Dalpati 09 October 2017

Thank you for your appreciation Mani Sir. I'm blessed

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Lamar Cole 08 October 2017

Very nice poem about the pond and the stream.

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Khirod Dalpati 08 October 2017

Thank you for your comments Sir. You made my day.

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Khirod Dalpati 08 October 2017

Human beings at times are like the stinking stagnant pond then to be the flowing stream.

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Anil Kumar Panda 08 October 2017

Nice poem on summer and rain. Beautifully composed and has a nice flow.Loved it.

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Khirod Dalpati 08 October 2017

Thank you for your comments Sir. Human beings at times are like the stinking pond then to be like the flowing stream.

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