Saturday, October 10, 2015

The Pond Comments

Rating: 4.9

The water in the pond drying
For it turned into vapors.
In a few days
No water will be there.
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 24 November 2022

Top score for this insightful poem with a powerful message to the humanity.Thank you dear Poet. To my favourite as well.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 24 November 2022

A wonderful poem Akham ji. Just cannot imagine a state when there is no water on earth. The world would be devastated.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 June 2022

This is a great little poem of perpetual value!

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Bharati Nayak 05 February 2022

Pond is drying.....Clouds turned to other direction----There is no hope of refilling ---Life is just sustaing! A great poem.It is not only the pond, even our lives become dry and die when we find no hope of refilling.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 January 2022

In a few days No water will be there. Yet the clouds seen At the distance turned away to other directions.......the poet has left enough substances for its readers to ponder on. A meaningful composition. It gives me immense pleasure revisit this poem multiple times.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 December 2021

A great poem that I have already put to my favourite!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 December 2021

Dear poet, when I think of you, I think of this wonderful poem...a great

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 January 2021

A splendid poem! Wish you and your beloved family happy new year 2021

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Unnikrishnan E S 28 December 2020

You are a Nature poet, a Natural one, with very keen observation skills and aesthetically sublime.5 stars

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M Asim Nehal 15 August 2020

The grave injustice by the clouds picking up water from the pond and taking to other place leaving the creature dependent on its water is a great satire on society, a very touching poem with multiple meanings. Thanks for sharing.10++

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Prabir Gayen 26 July 2020

Swimming here and there. ButOh, Clouds, Where you have flown! .! ! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 December 2019

Absolutely a fabulous poem with illustrious poetic beauty! i never hesitate to read this splendid work time and again! Stay always happy and blessed dear friend!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 November 2019

In the shallow water Of the pond Fishes are seen Swimming here and there.....fabulous imagery! My great pleasure revisiting this wonderful piece of poetry!

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Akhtar Jawad 29 September 2019

A pond gets water from the rains, but the clouds have flown away. A beautiful poem.

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Philo Yan 27 September 2019

The cycle of life for the fish depends on the rain. Without clouds, the pond will dry up and the fish may die. On reflection, aaren't we lucky to be born human?

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 August 2019

A fabulous poem so beautifully written! My great pleasure reading this magnificent piece of poetry time and again!

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 July 2019

superb poetic expression- In the shallow water Of the pond Fishes are seen Swimming here and there. But, Oh, Clouds, Where you have flown! /// 10+

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Prabir Gayen 05 February 2019

Dear friend ❤ 💋 💋 You are a very talented poet.. Swimming here and there. ButOh, Clouds, Where you have flown!

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Sk Nurul Huda 24 January 2019

awesome,.....Nice...Some simple words done a deep job......Highly philosophical and allegorical.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 January 2019

In the shallow water/Of the pond/Fishes are seen/Swimming here and there....it takes my memory back to my childhood days! My pleasure reading this beautiful poem time and again!

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