The Pond Comments

Top score for this insightful poem with a powerful message to the humanity.Thank you dear Poet. To my favourite as well.

A wonderful poem Akham ji. Just cannot imagine a state when there is no water on earth. The world would be devastated.

This is a great little poem of perpetual value!

Pond is drying.....Clouds turned to other direction----There is no hope of refilling ---Life is just sustaing! A great poem.It is not only the pond, even our lives become dry and die when we find no hope of refilling.

In a few days No water will be there. Yet the clouds seen At the distance turned away to other directions.......the poet has left enough substances for its readers to ponder on. A meaningful composition. It gives me immense pleasure revisit this poem multiple times.

A great poem that I have already put to my favourite!

Dear poet, when I think of you, I think of this wonderful poem...a great

A splendid poem! Wish you and your beloved family happy new year 2021

You are a Nature poet, a Natural one, with very keen observation skills and aesthetically sublime.5 stars

The grave injustice by the clouds picking up water from the pond and taking to other place leaving the creature dependent on its water is a great satire on society, a very touching poem with multiple meanings. Thanks for sharing.10++

Swimming here and there. ButOh, Clouds, Where you have flown! .! ! !

Absolutely a fabulous poem with illustrious poetic beauty! i never hesitate to read this splendid work time and again! Stay always happy and blessed dear friend!

In the shallow water Of the pond Fishes are seen Swimming here and there.....fabulous imagery! My great pleasure revisiting this wonderful piece of poetry!

A pond gets water from the rains, but the clouds have flown away. A beautiful poem.

The cycle of life for the fish depends on the rain. Without clouds, the pond will dry up and the fish may die. On reflection, aaren't we lucky to be born human?

A fabulous poem so beautifully written! My great pleasure reading this magnificent piece of poetry time and again!

superb poetic expression- In the shallow water Of the pond Fishes are seen Swimming here and there. But, Oh, Clouds, Where you have flown! /// 10+

Dear friend ❤ 💋 💋 You are a very talented poet.. Swimming here and there. ButOh, Clouds, Where you have flown!

awesome,.....Nice...Some simple words done a deep job......Highly philosophical and allegorical.

In the shallow water/Of the pond/Fishes are seen/Swimming here and there....it takes my memory back to my childhood days! My pleasure reading this beautiful poem time and again!