Tuesday, June 2, 2009

The Politically Incorrect Truth Comments

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We are a group, a democracy
with right to speak out and right to be free
our system, you see is a little inapt
you can say, our system's corrupt
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Nithin Pradeep 02 June 2009

Simply put, it is very simple and thoughtful. It is just amazing that you come with new stuff in your poems. This time it is the rhyme scheme I loved! ! ! Let's be optimistic about a change in the near future! ! !

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vamsi Krishna 02 June 2009

its a gud composition but no use no one will even care to change even after reading this ive tried a lot n written on it a lot

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